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posted by [identity profile] meiou-set.livejournal.com at 08:32pm on 01/04/2010
Oooh <333

I love the repetition at the end and the description of what she saw. This was wonderful.
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posted by [identity profile] recrudescence.livejournal.com at 08:37pm on 01/04/2010
I like how it's almost obsessive-compulsive, you know? Like the speaker just had to repeat the last line so the first and last stanzas would be symmetrical. Very much in keeping with the mathematical theme.
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