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Right. Right. Right. I could just read the other parts, but it's three thirty in the morning and I shouldn't still be up. I have class in the morning, what am I thinking? Only I started reading and then I couldn't stop because it's wonderfully written. I wish I kept a list of all the lines I loved, but I remember... Let's see.. The whole:


"My God, he isn't infallible. My illusions are shattered. We'll never recover."

At least there's no unfamiliar woman claiming to be his wife, so that's a good sign. Simon carefully turns enough to glare.

"I bet he puked-- Jayne, did he puke?"

I can just see it in my mind so perfectly, I think I might have snorted out loud at that part. You didn't have to add any sort of description, I can just picture Mal saying that first line in that little, mocking voice. And, also. "Y'have not. He's very...shy." Smiling like it's sweet or something. Is just so Kaylee I couldn't help but smile when I read it. Really, the only constructive thing I could hope to say is the way it sometimes bounced back and fourth between point of views but, hell, the voices were different enough that it was never hard to follow. Oh, God, it's three am and I should not - NOT click that link to the next part...

This is a very rambling way of telling you I loved it, by the way.