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Yvi ([personal profile] recrudescence) wrote2010-04-02 05:01 am
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omfg national poetry month

Barn

She hit a boy
with a shovel
in a barn. She

saw nothing
but the math
of it. Ascent,
arc, intersect.

And the shapes:
triangle on oval
in a sun-drowned
pentagon.

A thing in motion
tends to stay. She
hit a boy. She
grew up to list

numbers in files
in pale rooms
full of dustless
air. She wears

nice clothes.
She wears
nice clothes.

-- Rachel Contreni Flynn

[identity profile] meiou-set.livejournal.com 2010-04-01 08:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooh <333

I love the repetition at the end and the description of what she saw. This was wonderful.
ext_25882: (Midnight Sun Over Greenland)

[identity profile] nightdog-barks.livejournal.com 2010-04-01 09:55 pm (UTC)(link)
YIKES.

I like this a lot ...

[identity profile] daasgrrl.livejournal.com 2010-04-01 11:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Really loved this - so compact, yet disturbing.